Dum Dum
I did this project last year, in art 2. I personally feel like this one is alright. One thing I really wish I had done was add more colors into the wrapper instead of keeping it a bright white. For me, using colors other than the ones that I see is hard because I focus too much on making it realistic. I think I rushed this project too much and I hate when I do that. Overall, I like it, there are just a couple things I would do differently, I would make the picture of the flavor (blue rasberries) a little bit larger just because I think it would make the wrapper look like it has more on it. I would also work on the folds around the stick to make them look more like they are wrapped not just sticking out.
Jolly Rancher
I do not like this jolly rancher at all. I was sick one of the days we worked on it and I didn't get to finish it and instead of leaving it undone I just rushed through it and put a bunch of green in it. I actually liked working with the chalk and the idea of drawing a jolly rancher and I personally just wish that I hadn't of rushed. One thing that I do like in this piece is the lettering, I think it looks realistic, especially compared to the rest of the drawing.